As the right door
opened the man felt the fear in his heart, for he did not know what awaited
him. The fair lady came from the door. The man’s heart was undecided on whether
to be happy that he was alive, or sad that he must be married to a woman he had
never met. Then the group of singing dancing performers, along with the priest
to marry the two on the spot in witch they stand. After the sermons and parties
the man and his new wife lay sleeping. Suddenly in the middle of the night the
man awoke in a cold sweat. He had been
tormented by a dream in witch he is being torn limb from limb by the ferocious
tiger that could have been behind the door that his lover might have chosen. When
the morning came he was at the farmhouse he lived in.
He got out of his bed and looked out the window to see the
yard full of goets. Then his new wife woke up and joned him at the window, but
he started to hear the voice of the prinses saying wake up my love wake up.
Just then he wus sudintley in a room with his love the prises on a bed. Then he
reelised the woul event wad just ben a dream.
Your ending is predictable, and check your grammar especially in the last sentence...but overall good work.
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